Name: Passengers, Rearranged
Uploaded: 2025-05-23T05:41:21.000Z
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Here's a question for aspiring screenwriters.

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Is it possible to make the movie Passengers better with some relatively minor changes?

You know, I don't think this is a really bad film.

After hearing reviews from friends and online, I sort of expected it to be, but I think that feeling was mostly disappointed expectation.

After the interstellar spaceship Avalon malfunctions, Chris Pratt wakes up from hypersleep 90 years before he's supposed to, 90 years before anyone else on the ship.

He tries to do all of these things and fails.

As a year passes, he grows increasingly sad and hopeless.

So eventually he decides to wake up another passenger, Jennifer Lawrence, condemning her to the same fate, essentially death, in order to give himself some more company.

She finds out the truth, gets really mad, and then the ship begins to really malfunction.

So Pratt sacrifices himself to save it, but in the end, she saves him.

They fall in love again and spend the rest of their lives alone on the ship, happily ever after.

It's way better than what Oscar-nominated actor Andy Garcia got.

So you can break this plot up into five basic turning points.

The most acute tension in the film happens between parts two and three, when Jennifer starts to fall in love with Chris, but doesn't yet know the truth.

We know the truth is coming, there's a little dramatic irony there, and so we wait with increasing anxiety until it does.

And when it does, predictably, Jennifer freaks out, predictably, and we feel a little sadness, predictably.

At this point, exactly an hour into the movie, the script has sort of written itself into a corner.

Because Pratt is the real main character, because we spend 30 minutes alone with him at the start of the film and see everything through his eyes, there's really only two paths to take regarding the central relationship.

In both ways, he finds absolution for the sin he committed, because you're not going to be able to turn him bad, not a character like this, not unless you have five seasons to do it.

And yes, I know there are some allusions to The Shining here, but The Shining spent pretty much no time at all endearing us to the character of Jack Torrance.

Passengers spends the whole first act endearing us to the lovable, scrappy Chris Pratt.

It's clear the creators, or the studio, were intent on this being a love story, so they chose to go with the schmaltzy ending.

The last 45 minutes would have been the same, a movie pretty much devoid of real tension or suspense, which requires a completely new plot device in the third act, the total malfunction of the ship, to juice the ending with some adrenaline.

You know, a couple weeks ago I was watching Chris Stuckman and Doug Walker's joint review of Passengers, and Walker said something interesting.

If they told this in a different order, it wouldn't have been ten times more interesting.

The thing I began to wonder is, what if you rearranged the movie so that Jennifer Lawrence was the point of view character, not Chris Pratt?

What if the film began with her experience?

Well, I couldn't stop thinking about it, so I re-edited the existing footage to see what would happen to the story.

You just spent 120 years in suspended animation.

When I made this change, and just watched from there, some interesting things started to happen.

First of all, the first act changes its tone entirely.

With the original first act, you're wandering around the ship with Chris Pratt.

You learn cool things, you see him come to terms with the situation, have fun, get depressed, and finally reach the ethical dilemma that's meant to animate the movie.

What you see is what you get here, which makes for a somewhat passive viewing experience.

It's an amusing sequence, but that's mostly down to cool production design and Pratt's always charming performance.

Guess I am gonna die of old age on this ship.

But in the new first act, the story is infused from the start with mystery.

When I made the editing changes, I was genuinely surprised by just how creepy Pratt's character is when you take away his point of view.

We don't know whether to trust him or not, believe him or not, and that makes the audience's experience an active one in every moment.

As he leads Jennifer around the ship, locations become crime scenes where the viewer tries to figure out what's happening.

This, of course, by the way, is what makes Andrei Tarkovsky's Solaris so great.

So much has happened on Solaris by the time the lead character arrives that he and the audience have to piece the fragments together themselves.

I actually think that Pratt's performance takes on more dimensions from this angle.

You're not always forced to see him as sympathetic, so his darker side comes out in greater relief.

More important than that, the dark choice that sits at the heart of this film hits with greater impact when seen for the first time from Lawrence's perspective because we feel the cruelty as she feels it.

So now we're at the point where the original story hits that dead end.

But with this new edit, you have some more options to play with.

Namely, with this configuration, you could actually turn Pratt into the villain the original film suggests but can't follow through on and make passengers into the thriller horror film that so many critics wanted to see.

You could even cut back in that whole first section of Chris's time alone on the ship but put it after the revelation.

Without the need to justify his good guy-ness, you could show a deeper, more desperate side to his loneliness.

Something that I think actually would make him more sympathetic in the end and the choice he makes more agonizing.

Of course, this simple cut and paste doesn't solve every problem in this script.

The ending, for example, is still an issue.

I think you'd want to remove the malfunction McGuffin, but it might be just as trite to close the story in true horror fashion.

It could be cool to give it a Twilight Zone ending as Peter Scretta at Slashfilm suggested and have Pratt die and Lawrence get so lonely that she begins to contemplate the same horrible choice.

Brainstorming like this is obviously really fun and much easier than actually writing a movie and making one.

For all its faults, Passengers is a big budget movie with a completely original script and that should be celebrated because it's a dying breed.

But a film like this is a good opportunity for would-be screenwriters to think about story.

Because you can learn just as much from films that don't work as you can from those that do.

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