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  • Last week on November 9th, A Light in the Mist  came out, concluding the arc we have been with for  

  • the last two and a half years: The Broken Code. As  such, it's time that I give some thoughts on it:  

  • both this book, and the arc as a wholeSpoilers for the latest book will be included,  

  • but I'll give warnings when we reach  those sections. It's safe to say though,  

  • regardless of anything else, this arc waswild roller coaster of ups and downs for me.

  • Let me begin where it all began: Lost Stars, and  I'll say right now that it was a really promising  

  • start. We're introduced to our three protagonistsall of which have distinct personalities, goals,  

  • and obstacles in the way of those goals, and who  look like they could not only have strong roles  

  • in the quickly forming plot, but also dynamics  with each other and other members of their clans  

  • in the future. It presents a lot of intrigue, and  characters that are fun to watch while you wait  

  • for that intrigue to pay off. Starclan is shut  off, Shadowpaw is receiving strange visions,  

  • Rootpaw loves Bristlefrost who doesn't love him  back and loves Stemleaf who doesn't love her back  

  • and loves Spotfur, and at the end, Bramblestar  is seemingly revives...but he isn't himself. The  

  • possibilities were oozing out of the story, and  as a result I and many others got *very* excited.

  • The second book, The Silent Thaw, delivered  on that excitement. The imposter was cruel,  

  • decisive, and very intimidating, Shadowsight  inadvertently becomes the imposter's mouthpiece,  

  • helping him gain influence over all four clans  and drive out an assortment of beloved cats,  

  • Bristlefrost is manipulated to become the  imposter's spy in Thunderclan, and Rootpaw is  

  • being contacted by the real Bramblestar through  the ghost powers he inherited from Tree and the  

  • Sisters. Tensions not only in Thunderclan but  between the different clans starts to rise,  

  • and a rebel group forms in secret that includes  Rootpaw and eventually Bristlefrost, when she  

  • comes to understand all that happened. And just as  it was about to end, Shadowsight seemingly died.

  • Veil of Shadows was pretty good too, all things  considered. It had a couple very strange left  

  • turns like suddenly killing off StemleafBerrynose, and Rosepetal among others,  

  • and Bristlefrost's confession to Rootspring, but  the intriguing imposter drama, the clan tensions,  

  • and the workings of the rebel group as they plan  to face down with the imposter are all really  

  • interesting pieces to read about. Shadowsight's  semi-resurrection with Rootspring's help was  

  • somewhat anticlimactic, but I personally didn't  ever believe that they would permanently kill off  

  • one of the point of view characters in the middle  of the story so it still met my expectations.

  • Darkness Within on the other hand...did not. This  remains my least favorite book of the arc because  

  • it is so aimless. Very little gets done, and we  instead spend a lot of time building up a truly  

  • unrealistic level of bullying for Shadowsight  to give him sympathy without building him a  

  • character and make him sort of...kind of help  Ashfur out of left field at the end. A similar  

  • and even more unnecessary treatment is given to  Squirrelflight as Thunderclan's acting leader,  

  • which has no purpose except to say that we  need Bramblestar back. The rest of our time  

  • is spent on a journey with Rootspring, the  now capable warrior and sister-descendant,  

  • and Bristlefrost, who decided to drop  all of her personality and character  

  • arc potential at the door, trading  it in for bland romantic interest.

  • The Place of No Stars wasn't much  better. It had intrigue going for it,  

  • with the new Dark Forest lore and  confrontations with Ashfur to enjoy,  

  • along with the now fan-favorite character  Snowtuft. But it's a very circular plot,  

  • just going in and out and in and out of the Dark  Forest without much progression of any kind.  

  • By the end Squirrelflight was out of the Dark  Forest and Willowshine and Rootspring were in,  

  • but the goal ofgo into the Dark Forest  to save cats who are stuck in therethat  

  • drives the actions in this book is exactly the  same as the drive that begins the next book.

  • And so we come to A Light in the MistSpoiler warning of course, and you can  

  • skip to this timestamp or past this upcoming  “spoilerchapter to avoid hearing about it.

  • I honestly enjoyed this book, certainly more  than the two that preceded it. It all took  

  • place over the course of a day or two, so of  course there were pacing issues, and plenty of  

  • moments to make you squint in confusion or groan  in frustration when it came to the reforming, or  

  • lack thereof, that the warrior code eventually  got and the lore of Starclan and the Dark  

  • Forest that is growing ever more complicated and  contradictory, but it was still a fun read. All  

  • of the characters, even some side charactersseemed to have personalities and goals again,  

  • and there were a few genuinely moving sceneslike Squirrelflight's declaration that she  

  • wants to fight Ashfur, and her subsequent  message to him through Graystripe, along with  

  • Bristlefrost's permadeath, and the aftermath of it  with Rootspring having to explain to her desperate  

  • parents that she is very much gone. Honestly,  I expected much worse. But most of those Dark  

  • Forest cats clearly don't need to be in the Dark  Forest, right? Starclan's judgement is absurd.

  • Many of both the strengths and faults  in this arc come from its characters,  

  • starting with Bristlefrost. I've already talked at  length about her before, so I'll keep this brief,  

  • but Bristlefrost was the character I was most  invested in from the beginning of the arc,  

  • as she had the most interesting mix of  strengths and weaknesses to me that could  

  • lead to a fairly obvious but really compelling  character arc...but this was never done,  

  • and she was instead systematically stripped of  every trait or possibility she had going for  

  • her until she was unrecognizable and only there to  love Rootspring. As for in A Light in the Mist...

  • My sweetheart was back! She was bravecompassionate, independent, and selfless, clearly  

  • acting not just for herself or Rootspring, but  for every cat she came across. She and Stemleaf  

  • actually got along again, and she knowingly  sacrifices herself to save everyone. I'd love  

  • to ignore the previous two books' interpretation  of her, but she redeemed herself for me here.

  • Speaking of the guy she loves, Rootspring probably  got the best arc of the three protagonists,  

  • but it still wasn't perfect. He began as an  insecure, irritable young apprentice with  

  • wild and erratic emotional outburstsboth positive and negative. However,  

  • as he matured and went through more formative and  dangerous experiences, he mellowed out and became  

  • far more serious, although, also more stock  and simple as warriors toms are concerned.  

  • The latter half of the arc didn't give himor anyone, much to do, which prevented us  

  • from seeing exactly what this new maturity  gave him. However, in A Light in the Mist

  • While he isn't the focus by any means, he does  get to show off how he's grown as he tries to  

  • comfort her parents by summoning her spirit even  when he knows it won't work, along with boldly  

  • and matter-of-factly declaring his commitment  to her at the gathering to convince the clans  

  • to change the code...although, not by much, and  in a way that is riddled with its own problems.

  • Shadowsight meanwhile...well he fell flat too, but  in a very different way. His was the arc given the  

  • most attention, but it was done quite sloppilyand with little care for his own personal  

  • character as opposed to how cruel the world around  him was. They didn't give him choices to make and  

  • obstacles to overcome so much as they gave him  a barrage of unfair and unrealistic experiences  

  • and expected you to sympathize with him  regardless of how you felt about his character.  

  • He also lacked positive relationships even more  than the other protagonists, which didn't give him  

  • time to show off much of who he was beyond  his suffering. Now, in the newest book...

  • He...somehow pulled an entire character out of  his hat. He has goals, worries, obstacles and a  

  • personality to help him get past them. He also  ends the book with a new and distinctive trait:  

  • being a medicine cat who can't, and in fact could  never communicate with Starclan, yet is still  

  • accepted in for all he's done as a healer, and  recently a warrior and even a savior of sorts.

  • There is one last character to  discuss, the antagonist of course.  

  • Bringing Ashfur back was a strong move for  the editors to make, as he did have a lot of  

  • unfinished business with members of the castand his presence as a Starclan cat could give  

  • an interesting perspective, when comparing him  to the Dark Forest and rogue armies of the past.  

  • There is an awful lot of hand-waving when it comes  to his abilities and how exactly he is able to,  

  • for example, close the Starclan border so no one  can get through or control any ghost cat he comes  

  • across, but in concept he works fine, and there is  no doubt that he has a conniving and threatening  

  • presence throughout his stories, along with  a desperation and pettiness emblematic of his  

  • previous behavior towards Squirrelflight. Every  tragedy that comes up in this arc is effectively  

  • a consequence of his arrogance and vindictivenesswhich I honestly find to be great for a villain.

  • For the arc as a whole, there are a few general  notes, themes, and issues to cover, with the first  

  • being Starclan. The clans have always greatly  revered their ancestors and considered them far  

  • more benevolent, powerful, and necessary  than we've come to understand them to be,  

  • but in this arc, with Starclan missing entirelythe clans seem to break apart and every cat grows  

  • very hostile, something the arc attributes  to Starclan being missing. Personally,  

  • the idea that their religion disappearing would  suddenly negate morality and compassion is not an  

  • idea I've ever been able to get behind, and this  arc isn't the first to have brought it up. On the  

  • other side of their afterlife, the Dark Forest  has new lore, inventing an emotion-based power  

  • system that allows strongly motivated cats to  heavily alter all worlds and members of the dead,  

  • and actively corrupts any cat who is in the Dark  Forest for too long. It's not something that was  

  • ever true before in previous appearances of the  afterlives, but the Dark Forest hasn't ever stayed  

  • consistent for more than an arc at a time, so  if it's used properly, I don't mind it much.  

  • Like all of the recent arcs, the Broken Code also  suffered from a huge dip in quality and direction  

  • after the third book, as well as not often showing  off or caring about side characters like Stemleaf  

  • and Berrynose, Myrtlepaw and Sorrelstripe, or  even family like Ivypool, Fernsong, and Thriftear.  

  • Characters only appear insofar as they are  directly needed for the story, and not for  

  • the sake of developing any relationships  between each other or the main characters.

  • Now it's time to leave the Broken Code  behind, and set our sights on what comes next:  

  • A Starless Clan, with the first book, Riverset to release this coming April. We don't know  

  • much about any of the cats who will soon be our  new protagonists, so I'm willing to give them a  

  • chance and see what is done with these relative  blank slates. Flamepaw, one of the trillion  

  • Firestar descendants who is going to struggle  upholding the legacy of a cat none of his peers  

  • or even his parents have ever met, Sunbeam,  a cat...in Shadowclan. Who will...struggle  

  • at... something in Shadowclan. And Frostpawwho will become a medicine cat apprentice in  

  • Riverclan, something that automatically makes  me excited. Finally seeing what goes on over  

  • there across the lake will almost certainly  be interesting, regardless of anything else.  

  • (But if Mistystar and Reedwhisker could both die  leaving Frostpaw to choose the next leader a la  

  • Code of the Clans, I would be even happier.) It's  safe to say that wherever the series goes next,  

  • I will be willing to come along for the rideEven the lacking arcs and material from the  

  • series have given us wonderful new elements  and ideas to enjoy and bounce off of, and I am  

  • confident that A Starless Clan will continue that  trend. Good luck, Warriors. I'm pulling for you.

  • Thank you for watching, and always  remember to challenge the world as it is,  

  • and work towards the changes you'd like to see.

Last week on November 9th, A Light in the Mist  came out, concluding the arc we have been with for  

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