And in doing that, you're going to be reciting grammatically accurate sentences over and over.

So my hope is that you will walk away from this video with a few sentence structures that you can apply to your own writing.

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So let's get to the essay question that that we're going to be responding to.

This is a question that was seen last month's That's January 2017.

Um, I believe it was seen in India somewhere.

I haven't noted to hear, um, this one I've seen in Hyderabad, India.

Ah, the question reads.

Nowadays, all new town planning should include public parks, shopping malls and sports facilities.

Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Okay, now the point of today's video is not so much to go through the structure of an essay and to ghost, you know, to describe the writing process to you.

It's more to help commit to dramatically accurate sentence structures to your memory so that you can reproduce these structures in your own writing.

Now, let me demonstrate what I mean when I say that.

So what we're gonna do is I got a blank page here.

Okay?

I'm gonna write the sentences one by one.

Um, to this essay in response to the question that we that we just saw.

Now, after each sentence, I'm gonna give you a few seconds to read the sentence over in your head.

Try to try to repeat it in your head a couple times, Then I'm gonna delete it, and three sentences will come up on the screen, and I want you to choose the sentence that matches the sentence that I just deleted.

So you may be wondering why would we engage in exercise like this?

Well, in reciting the sentence over and over in your head, you're gonna help to commit it to memory.

And my hope is that you're gonna walk away from this video able to reproduce a similar sentence in your own writing.

All right, so let's start writing our essay.

So the first sentence in our essay is designing the layouts of a new town is an extremely intricate process.

Okay, so read that sentence over.

Designing the layout of a new town is an extremely intricate process.

Okay, And there goes.

It is gone.

Now, let's bring these three sentences up here.

All right?

So which of the sentences matches?

The one that I just wrote?

Designing Ali out of a new town is an extremely intricate process.

Designing the layout of a new town is an extremely intricate process.

Designing layouts for a new town is an extremely intricate process.

Okay.

And the answer is sentenced number two.

That was theory.

Jinnah ll sentence now just the notes that all of the sentences that I'm including here are grammatically correct.

But I'm just trying to, um, to just work on your memory and help you sort of remember, the exact phrasing that that is is used to create the sentences for this particular essay.

All right, so let's go to sentence number two, um, the question of what should and should not be included.

Um, sets the foundation of the towns.

Ah, identity forever.

Okay.

The question of what should and should not be included sets the foundation of the town's identity forever.

All right.

And there it goes.

Now, have a look at these three sentences.

You should come up a moment.

Yeah.

Okay, there we go.

Okay.

So the question of what should and should not be included sets the foundation of the town's identity forever.

The question of what should and should not be included sets the foundation since a foundation for the town's identity forever.

The question of what should or should not be included sets the foundation of the town's identity forever.

So which of these versions did we see in that sentence that I just wrote?

And the answer is the 1st 1 So the question of what should and should not be included sets the foundation of the town's identity forever.

Okay, so let's put that into our essay as sentenced.

Number two.

All right.

Sentence number three.

In my opinion, the addition of public parks, shopping malls and sports facilities is essential to the incubation of community and the encouragement, uh, healthy lifestyles Okay, So in my opinion, the addition of public parks, shopping malls and sports facilities is essential to the incubation of community and the encouragement of healthy lifestyles.

All right, so I hope you have that one.

Let's take that away and bring up our options.

So here they are.

In my opinion, the addition of public parks, shopping malls and sports facilities is essential to the incubation of community and the encouragement of healthy lifestyles.

Or maybe option number two.

In my opinion, the addition of public parks, shopping malls and sports facilities is essential to the formation of community and the encouragement of healthy lifestyles or number three.

In my opinion, the addition of public parks, shopping malls and sports facilities is essential to both the incubation of community and the encouragement of healthy lifestyles.

So which of those three sentences, um, is the one that I just typed?

And the answer here is the first version.

So let's inputs that into our essay.

Okay, so in my opinion, the addition of public parks, shopping malls and sports facilities is essential to the incubation of community and the encouragement of healthy lifestyles.

Uh, okay.

Now let's get to our next sentence.

I thus agree that these items should be included when a new town is being, um planned.

And I will, uh, share examples to prove this.

Okay, So that sentences I've s agree that these items should be included when a new town is being planned.

And I will share examples to prove this so sort of a combination of a thesis with the outline sentence.

Okay.

Do you think you have that one?

Let's delete it and see if you can recall it.

And Caesar, a scroll down to three.

I disagree that these items should be included when new towns are being planned.

And I will share examples to prove this or I thus agree that these items are best included when a new town is being planned and I will share examples to prove this or I just agree that these items should be included when a new town is being planned and I will share examples to prove this.

Okay.

And the answer here is the 3rd 1 See, that's noted on my paper anyways, but yes.

So the last sentence was the version that I taped in the essay.

Good.

So I hope you got those four correct will continue with the rest of us, but I just want to read through the introduction paragraph so you can kind of see the way that the sentence is sort of flow together.

Designing the layout of a new town is an extremely intricate process.

The question of what should and should not be included sets the foundation of the town's identity forever.

In my opinion, the addition of public parks, shopping malls and sports facilities is essential to the incubation of community and the encouragement of healthy lifestyles.

I just agree that these items should be included when a new town is being planned, and I will share examples to prove this.

Okay, so then we carry on to our first supporting paragraph.

So let me east just skip lying here.

So the first sentence is firstly, public parts and shopping centers help new towns foster a sense of community.

Okay, firstly, public parks and shopping centers help Newtown's foster a sense of community.

All right, Do you think you have it?

Let's delete it, see if you can identify it in this list.

Firstly, public parks and shopping centers help new towns faster build a sense of community.

Firstly, public parks and shopping centers centers help Newtown's foster a kind of community.

Firstly, public parks and shopping centers help Newtown's foster a sense of community.

And the version of the sentence you saw, um, is this last version here.

So let's input that into our essay hooks.

There we go first.

The public parks and shopping centers help Newtown's foster a sense of community.

Now let's carry on with examples.

For example, um, my small Canadian town has a very nice park near its center.

Okay, for example, my small Canadian town has a very nice park near its center, all right, and I am deleting that sentence.

Can you identify it from this list?

For example, my small Canadian town has a very decent park near its center.

For example, my small Canadian town has very nice park near its center, for example, our small Canadian town has a very nice park near its center.

And yes, of course, the answer is the middle one here.

I think I might have given it away when I was reading out those options, but anyway, so let's input that here.

So, for example, My small Canadian town has a very nice park near its center.

Okay, so we're gonna carry on to explain the example, but further so at weekends, the open context of the park, um, environment makes it possible for people to meet other and create friendships.

Friend ships.

Okay, so at weekends, the open context, the park environment makes it possible for people to meet each other and create friendships.

All right, Do you think you have that?

Let me delete it.

Can you choose it from this list on weekends?

The open context of the park environment makes it possible for people to meet each other and create friendships at weekends.

The open context.

The park makes it possible for people to meet each other and create friendships at weekends.

The open context of the park environment makes it possible for people to meet each other and create friendships.

And the sentence you saw was the 3rd 1 here at weekends.

Now on weekends is a possible way to say it.

A zay said all of the sentences I'm showing you today are grammatically correct, but on weekends is more of a North American way to refer to the period of the weekend.

So at weekends is is the British way.

And that is the original version that I used in this essay.

So let's carry on.

Um okay.

This sort of organic, um, community building, um, is seen in my poem Towns Shopping Mall two.

This sort of organic community building is seen in my hometown shopping mall, too.

Okay.

Do you have that one?

I'm deleting it.

All right, let's go down to our list.

This sort of organic community building is seen in my hometown's shopping mall, too.

This sort of organic organic community building is also seen in my hometown shopping mall.

This sort of organic community building is in my home town shopping mall, too.

And the version you saw is this first versions of these two here.

So let's insert this into the response.

Okay, so this sort of organic community building has seen in my hometown's shopping mall, too.

Um, now we're gonna carry on.

Just explain the idea of the shopping mall a bit further, how it's the, uh, a form for communities in a way.

So shopping malls encourage interaction.

Um, and thus they are great forums within which people uh can mingle and have experiences that's could evolved into friendships.

I was looking at my paper, as I taught as they wrote these so experiences.

Okay, so shopping malls encouraging direction and thus they are great forms within which people can mingle and have experiences that could evolve into friendships.

All right, let's remove that sentence.

Can you select it?

Shopping malls encourage interaction, and thus they are great forms within which people can mingle and have experiences that could evolve into friendships.

Shopping malls encourage interaction, and thus their great forums within which people can meet and have experiences that could evolve into friendships.

Shopping malls encourage interaction, and thus their great forms within which people can mingle and have experiences that often evolved into friendships.

And the answer here is the first sentence.

So shopping malls encourage interaction, and thus they are great forms within which people can mingle and have experiences that could evolve into friendships.

Okay, let's carry on here.

Um, so we're gonna close the burger of off.

You're so thus the helpful role public parks and shopping malls play in the establishing of a new town.

Um, is clear.

Okay, that's the help of role, public parks and shopping.

Most play and establishing a new town is clear.

All right, let's remove that sentence.

Can you select it from this list?

Thus, the role, public perks and shopping most play in the establishing of a new town is clear.

Thus, the helpful role public parks in shopping malls fulfill in the establishing of a new town is clear.

Thus, the helpful role public parks and shopping most play in the establishing of a new town is clear.

And the answer here is the last sentence.

Let's insert that into our essay.

Great.

So let's read through that first supporting paragraph when you can see how these different sentences work together.

Firstly, public parks and shopping centers help Newtown's foster a sense of community.

For example, my small Canadian town has a very nice park near its center at weekends.

Three.

Open context of the park environment makes it possible for people to meet each other and create friendships.

This sort of organic community building is seen in my hometown shopping mall to shopping malls, encourage interaction and thus their great forums within which people can mingle and have experiences that could evolve into friendships.

Thus, the help of role public parks and shopping malls playing the establishing of Ah, new town is clear.

Okay, And now let's carry on to our second, um, supporting paragraph.