Name: You construct a band 9 essay by the end of this video!
Uploaded: 2020-03-25T04:25:03.000Z
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in this video, we're going to try a completely new exercise style, and in this exercise you're gonna help me create a Band nine essay.

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And in doing that, you're going to be reciting grammatically accurate sentences over and over.

So my hope is that you will walk away from this video with a few sentence structures that you can apply to your own writing.

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So let's get to the essay question that that we're going to be responding to.

This is a question that was seen last month's That's January 2017.

Um, I believe it was seen in India somewhere.

I haven't noted to hear, um, this one I've seen in Hyderabad, India.

Nowadays, all new town planning should include public parks, shopping malls and sports facilities.

Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Okay, now the point of today's video is not so much to go through the structure of an essay and to ghost, you know, to describe the writing process to you.

It's more to help commit to dramatically accurate sentence structures to your memory so that you can reproduce these structures in your own writing.

Now, let me demonstrate what I mean when I say that.

So what we're gonna do is I got a blank page here.

I'm gonna write the sentences one by one.

Um, to this essay in response to the question that we that we just saw.

Now, after each sentence, I'm gonna give you a few seconds to read the sentence over in your head.

Try to try to repeat it in your head a couple times, Then I'm gonna delete it, and three sentences will come up on the screen, and I want you to choose the sentence that matches the sentence that I just deleted.

So you may be wondering why would we engage in exercise like this?

Well, in reciting the sentence over and over in your head, you're gonna help to commit it to memory.

And my hope is that you're gonna walk away from this video able to reproduce a similar sentence in your own writing.

All right, so let's start writing our essay.

So the first sentence in our essay is designing the layouts of a new town is an extremely intricate process.

Designing the layout of a new town is an extremely intricate process.

Now, let's bring these three sentences up here.

Designing Ali out of a new town is an extremely intricate process.

Designing layouts for a new town is an extremely intricate process.

Jinnah ll sentence now just the notes that all of the sentences that I'm including here are grammatically correct.

But I'm just trying to, um, to just work on your memory and help you sort of remember, the exact phrasing that that is is used to create the sentences for this particular essay.

All right, so let's go to sentence number two, um, the question of what should and should not be included.

The question of what should and should not be included sets the foundation of the town's identity forever.

Now, have a look at these three sentences.

So the question of what should and should not be included sets the foundation of the town's identity forever.

The question of what should and should not be included sets the foundation since a foundation for the town's identity forever.

The question of what should or should not be included sets the foundation of the town's identity forever.

So which of these versions did we see in that sentence that I just wrote?

And the answer is the 1st 1 So the question of what should and should not be included sets the foundation of the town's identity forever.

Okay, so let's put that into our essay as sentenced.

In my opinion, the addition of public parks, shopping malls and sports facilities is essential to the incubation of community and the encouragement, uh, healthy lifestyles Okay, So in my opinion, the addition of public parks, shopping malls and sports facilities is essential to the incubation of community and the encouragement of healthy lifestyles.

Let's take that away and bring up our options.

In my opinion, the addition of public parks, shopping malls and sports facilities is essential to the incubation of community and the encouragement of healthy lifestyles.

In my opinion, the addition of public parks, shopping malls and sports facilities is essential to the formation of community and the encouragement of healthy lifestyles or number three.

In my opinion, the addition of public parks, shopping malls and sports facilities is essential to both the incubation of community and the encouragement of healthy lifestyles.

So which of those three sentences, um, is the one that I just typed?

And the answer here is the first version.

Okay, so in my opinion, the addition of public parks, shopping malls and sports facilities is essential to the incubation of community and the encouragement of healthy lifestyles.

I thus agree that these items should be included when a new town is being, um planned.

And I will, uh, share examples to prove this.

Okay, So that sentences I've s agree that these items should be included when a new town is being planned.

And I will share examples to prove this so sort of a combination of a thesis with the outline sentence.

Let's delete it and see if you can recall it.

I disagree that these items should be included when new towns are being planned.

And I will share examples to prove this or I thus agree that these items are best included when a new town is being planned and I will share examples to prove this or I just agree that these items should be included when a new town is being planned and I will share examples to prove this.

And the answer here is the 3rd 1 See, that's noted on my paper anyways, but yes.

So the last sentence was the version that I taped in the essay.

So I hope you got those four correct will continue with the rest of us, but I just want to read through the introduction paragraph so you can kind of see the way that the sentence is sort of flow together.

I just agree that these items should be included when a new town is being planned, and I will share examples to prove this.

Okay, so then we carry on to our first supporting paragraph.

So the first sentence is firstly, public parts and shopping centers help new towns foster a sense of community.

Okay, firstly, public parks and shopping centers help Newtown's foster a sense of community.

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