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  • Rising Storm is a bit of a lull in the original arc, well, the closest thing to a lull this arc has.

  • But it is also in the running for one of the best books in the arc,

  • for it's spread of characters and the moments they share together.

  • It's still a first-arc book at heart, but there are some significant improvements.

  • Rising Storm was released on January 6th of 2004, a little under 3 months after Forest of Secrets.

  • Evidentially having Cherith come on as a second author allowed the turnaround time for book releases to speed up,

  • though we'll have to see how long that lasts.

  • Kate Cary is back as the author of this one,

  • and considering this book is closer to Fire and Ice than Into the Wild in terms of plot advances,

  • we could expect her to be in her element by now and write a lovely book.

  • Before the story even begins, we can see some changes in the allegiances.

  • Between Fireheart's promotion, Tigerclaw's exile, Willowpelt's move to the nursery, and Graystripe's clan switch,

  • Thunderclan is back to having 8 warriors again.

  • But they also now have 6 apprentices. Brackenfur was made a warrior, but we have newcomers Fernpaw and Ashpaw.

  • There are now five queens instead of four with Willowpelt moving in,

  • making the nursery tied with the elders' den for number-of-cats.

  • Unfortunately, in this book, the top 10 characters have 86% of the lines.

  • The percentage hasn't been this high since Into the Wild,

  • and it's primarily because of Fireheart speaking more in this book than any other in the arc.

  • Not even the other cats in the top 10 can come close to him.

  • The characters that do get some focus around him are done very well, but Fireheart is very much the main star in this book.

  • As far as the female percentage, it's roughly the same as the last book.

  • Like Forest of Secrets, 38% of the characters are she-cats, but now they only have 33% of the lines, even less than before.

  • This is mostly because of the side characters, along with Fireheart getting the lion's share of the speaking time.

  • Of the characters with over 100 lines, and putting aside Fireheart, all of them are she-cats:

  • Sandstorm, Bluestar, and Cinderpelt.

  • But so many of the side characters and antagonists are male that it doesn't show much in the overall percentage.

  • Additionally, and I didn't mention this in the Forest of Secrets video since there wasn't much change,

  • but at this point the allegiances for Windclan, Riverclan, and Shadowclan are about even with each other in numbers of cats.

  • All of them have at least one elder and queen, 4 warriors with some apprentices,

  • and of course confirmed leaders, deputies, and medicine cats who all feature at least minorly in the story.

  • And now it's time to see what this new cast can do in the space of this book.

  • It's a pretty darn good one, so let's get into it.

  • We open the book with what is technically the first medicine cat point of view of the series!

  • See, you can't blame the New Prophecy for it!

  • Oh uh wait...yeah, yeah you can.

  • We'll get to that eventually.

  • For now, some mysterious medicine cat is mourning the slow loss of his leader's life by sickness

  • while the clan bemoans their lack of fortune.

  • Without learning which clan or even time period this is,

  • we move back to Fireheart's perspective, where he's having great difficulties teaching Cloudpaw.

  • Once he gives up on that problem, he tries to get used to the other difficult part of his new life: being deputy.

  • He struggles to get through patrols, helped by Sandstorm, a calm, insightful, and competent warrior,

  • and Whitestorm, who shows far more wisdom and leadership qualities than Fireheart,

  • and then gets to overhear the elders gossip about *how his deputyship is doomed as he was named late.

  • Fireheart is scared of Tigerclaw, a fear that comes out when he looks at Bramblekit,

  • and Goldenflower confesses she knows the clan might not look favorably on her kits, and says she will protect them regardless.

  • Whitestorm continues to be the backdoor deputy

  • by learning and pointing out Ashkit and Fernkit's ages and recommending that they be made apprentices.

  • Bluestar isn't doing great so Fireheart has to choose the mentors,

  • and he asks every cat in the clan before going to Cinderpelt, who guides him through the process of making a decision.

  • He chooses Darkstripe and Dustpelt as the mentors.

  • Spottedleaf visits him in his dreams, but this time just to walk away from him and leave him calling out for her desperately.

  • What a great romance.

  • For an impromptu, unspecified reason, Bluestar needs to go to the Moonstone and speak with Starclan,

  • and she brings Fireheart along with her.

  • In their absence, Whitestorm agrees to take over and immediately slips into the role with ease, unlike Fireheart.

  • But the trip proves fruitless anyway, as Mudclaw and his patrol force Fireheart and Bluestar back,

  • and they don't reach the Moonstone.

  • After a gathering, Sandstorm, Fireheart, and Cinderpelt find two Shadowclan warriors:

  • Littlecloud and Whitethroat, sick on their territory,

  • and Cinderpelt decides to treat them with or without Fireheart's eventual and reluctant permission,

  • because she believes it to be the right thing to do.

  • Cloudpaw is well fed despite not bringing back much prey, and cats keep scenting him near the twolegplace,

  • which culminates when Fireheart sees his apprentice getting food from twolegs.

  • He feels guilty, and goes to both Princess and Sandstorm with his woes before he talks to Cloudpaw,

  • who doesn't see what's wrong and inadvertently induces massive insecurity in Fireheart about his own kittypet heritage.

  • Soon enough though, Cloudpaw is missing from camp and Sandstorm and Fireheart learn he was taken by the twolegs.

  • Sandstorm tries to console him and Fireheart lashes out at her

  • and says she's abandoning Cloudpaw because she doesn't care about kittypet-born cats...which she never suggested.

  • Really not cool dude, even if you're angry.

  • The rest of the clan, though, seems content with letting Cloudpaw be gone.

  • That night, Spottedleaf comes again and tells him toBeware a warrior who seems to sleep

  • nd given that every warrior she's mentioned in these mini-prophecies has been Tigerclaw,

  • you could guess where this is going.

  • But even putting that aside...Fireheart and Bluestar have been on high alert for Tigerclaw through this whole book.

  • Even if Fireheart interpreted it perfectly in an instant, which surprise surprise he doesn't,

  • he would do nothing differently, at all...gosh I hate these first arc mini-prophecies.

  • Fireheart misinterprets the prophecy and drives out the sick Shadowclan cats instead,

  • following it up with a visit to Graystripe at their border to be sure they're gone and generally catch up on news.

  • It's not all sunshine and rainbows though,

  • because Mousefur, Thornpaw, and Runningwind were attacked by Tigerclaw and Runningwind is now dead.

  • Shocker.

  • Fireheart goes to confront him and even then he briefly believes Whitethroat, the sick and weak Shadowclan cat,

  • killed Runningwind instead of Tigerclaw...Fireheart is kind of an idiot.

  • Anyway, Whitethroat dies on the Thunderpath and Tigerclaw's patrol fights Fireheart's

  • and almost wins before Graystripe comes in with a patrol of his own.

  • Bluestar is very shaken about Tigerclaw's threat as the clan mourns Runningwind.

  • After a while of heightened patrols and sped up training making everyone tired,

  • Ravenpaw comes to visit with news of a fluffy white kittypet with Thunderclan scent: Cloudpaw.

  • Immediately Fireheart decides to get his apprentice back, rescuing him from his terribly unhappy life with the twolegs.

  • Sandstorm, after failing to convince him not to go, decides to join him.

  • They rescue Cloudpaw and, after a couple run-ins with some dogs and a Windclan patrol,

  • arrive safely back with the apprentice in tow.

  • The clan accepts him after his story of being stolen,

  • and Fireheart agrees to keep the truth a secret as long as Cloudpaw proves he has learned his lesson.

  • The clan can't catch a break though, as that night there is a forest fire.

  • Thunderclan escapes to Riverclan, Fireheart saves Bramblekit and tries to save Patchpelt, but the elder dies.

  • Soon after, he is able to make his way back to Thunderclan's camp and he finds Halftail dead and Yellowfang,

  • who was supposed to help him out, dying.

  • A heart wrenching death scene occurs and Thunderclan returns to their camp.

  • Fireheart discovers Bluestar is not well enough to attend the gathering, and leads the clan to Fourtrees in her place.

  • After some sharing of news, the leaders gather, learn that Nightstar is dead,

  • and then...that Tigerstar is the new leader of Shadowclan.

  • Tigerstar being leader at the end of this book marks the end of the time

  • where either Bluestar or Fireheart should have thought to tell the other clans about him.

  • But for some reason, they choose not to do that, leading to plenty of pain for Shadowclan, Riverclan, and themselves.

  • Perhaps Bluestar wasn't thinking clearly enough to make that call

  • but Fireheart has never shied away from sharing crucial information across borders before,

  • especially in such a dire situation.

  • There really shouldn't have even been any backlash, based on what we've seen already.

  • When Shadowclan announced one of their own cats had turned traitor and was now wandering as a rogue,

  • no one took issue with it, even though Brokenstar, a cat no one really trusted, was giving the news.

  • Why would it be any different for the trustworthy Fireheart announcing Tigerclaw's departure?

  • There is another issue, one that isn't quite as pressing but that has been growing through this arc.

  • The clans aren't really that different from each other.

  • Now that we've seen sympathetic and unsympathetic sides of every clan, and bits of each of their cultures,

  • it's easier to see that the differences we were presented with at first aren't present.

  • The clans live in different places and prefer some types of prey but they're all first and foremost clan cats,

  • willing to work together and adapt to new situations if need-be.

  • Even Graystripe managed to get used to swimming and eating fish in less than a moon,

  • according to Leopardfur who certainly wouldn't hesitate to critique him if she found anything wrong.

  • Other than those little hiccups though, the plot is a fairly solid one, at least by Warriors standards.

  • Tigerclaw is minimally used until the end, more as a theoretical force in the background than an agent in the plot,

  • so let's get into the other characters: the meat of this book.

  • First, and for the future, it's worth noting that Onewhisker and Fireheart don't have a perfect friendship even here.

  • Fireheart gets angry at him for Windclan's behavior towards Thunderclan in this book,

  • and Onewhisker can't properly explain himself.

  • Still, they quickly brush it off and converse more freely.

  • Runningwind is still taking over as a mentor for every cat under the sun,

  • squashing his only line of previous characterization into dust just as he dies.

  • Poor guy never got to be anything concrete in this series, but I'm *sure* that's not a situation that will ever come up again.

  • Brightpaw once again has very little to say here but she's often used as a foil for Cloudpaw:

  • the perfect apprentice, being obedient, dutiful, compassionate, and patient.

  • Also, for the future, I'll just say that one of the only things she *does* say, is that

  • it would be nice to have Cloudpaw back,” and later, they greet each other with a friendly nuzzle.

  • Also, Dustpelt and Fernpaw are...getting along really well.

  • This isn't presented as terribly weird in the moment,

  • but looking back on this almost brand-new apprentice flirting with this fairly experienced warrior is...a bit uncomfortable.

  • When they're both adults they make a really nice pair

  • but it's important to remember that their cuteness later on can't and shouldn't erase where their relationship started.

  • We can praise them for what they did right while still acknowledging the relationship was founded on a serious flaw.

  • Graystripe only visits Fireheart briefly, and he seems to be getting along in Riverclan rather well.

  • He still cares for and helps Fireheart, of course, but he really seems to love his kits,

  • and after all the fish he's been eating he doesn't even mind swimming in the river.

  • This book does a lot to make you believe he could really be a Riverclan cat now and forever more.

  • He does show flits of disloyalty when the fire destroys his old territory,

  • but considering all of Riverclan was giving Thunderclan sympathy and shelter,

  • and how close he was to those woods and the cats there, it's understandable for now.

  • I like this Graystripe. He's on his best behavior.

  • For most of the book, Bluestar is distant, but occasionally she shows her affection for and trust in Fireheart.

  • She shows pride in the numerous times he has helped or saved the clan,

  • and treats him as the only worthwhile cat in Thunderclan, something Fireheart finds uncomfortable.

  • She's definitely still in control of her mind, but there are growing unfounded suspicions

  • that anyone who's read the series before will immediately see as warning signs for her future.

  • In fact, after the fire, she seems to fully crack before our eyes,

  • condemning Starclan for telling them fire would save her clan, refusing to go to the gathering,

  • and seeing traitors around every corner.

  • But I do really like her reaction to hearing about Ravenpaw's part in getting Cloudpaw back.

  • She remembers that he tried to warn the clan about Tigerclaw, and wishes she had listened.

  • She asks without a second thought if he should be invited back to the clan,

  • but we know from Ravenpaw's speech earlier that he wouldn't want to come back.

  • He has a happy life with Barley.

  • But it's good to know he's welcomed in Thunderclan, like a denmate in fact.

  • He doesn't receive Bluestar's ire, even in her more crazed moments.

  • Whitestorm is an amazing deputy.

  • He isn't deputy, but he's clearly working as the greatest power behind the throne for this whole book,

  • helping Fireheart and keeping a quiet watch over everything happening all over the clan.

  • He is the most obviously qualified cat around to be deputy.

  • I've always loved the relationship between Yellowfang and Cinderpelt*

  • and seeing it here at its peak before Yellowfang's death was great.

  • We saw them understanding each other, taking on some of each others' mannerisms,

  • respecting each other, and even quarreling with each other when it came to their beliefs.

  • They have a really beautiful friendship.

  • Cinderpelt herself is having significant insecurities about her place as a medicine cat,

  • but through helping Whitethroat and Littlecloud and learning to make her own decisions,

  • asserting herself over the (sometimes equally insecure) Fireheart, she comes into her own.

  • It's really inspiring, and nice to see that she keeps growing even past her injury plotline.

  • Being a medicine cat has made her a more compassionate, open, assertive, and talented cat.

  • Please stay a good character Cinderpelt.

  • As for cats that are not as inspiring, Cloudpaw is a brat,

  • made all the worse by the fact that he is usually a capable cat, outdoing his denmates when he bothers to try.

  • His biggest problem through the book is that he's talented enough that he doesn't have to try, and doesn't want to.

  • He usually gets the job done, but he's sloppy,

  • and doesn't hold much respect or care for Starclan, Fireheart...or anyone else for that matter.

  • Hopefully he will internalize his lesson from his run-in with the twolegs and improve going forward.

  • On a brighter note, for the first time, Sandstorm talks a substantial amount, more than anyone but Fireheart in fact.

  • Apparently losing Graystripe was exactly what she needed to...do anything.

  • This book's Sandstorm is the best she ever gets to be in the series.

  • I really think she could have been a more effective character if they let her speak more before now.

  • (Enemies to lovers only works if you show off the enemy part.)

  • Also, it is made clear in every book that Sandstorm is more intelligent, experienced, and generally competent than Fireheart,

  • but she's also continuously put on a lower level than him by the surrounding characters and the narrative.

  • Sandstorm is suggested first as one of the new mentors but Darkstripe is chosen over her since

  • It would be unwise to make two inexperienced warriors mentors together,”

  • which would be a great excuse if Fireheart and Graystripe, two completely fresh warriors who had barely gone on a patrol,

  • were both given apprentices together, and if this sort of thing didn't happen many times later in the series,

  • even under Firestar's leadership.

  • She expresses in this book that she's never had an apprentice, while Fireheart has had two,

  • and strongly implies, multiple times, that she wants one. Even Ravenpaw notices.

  • We'll see what Fireheart does with that information later but at this point she's mostly here to be an unnoticed love interest

  • since Fireheart is too wrapped up in his own problems and his ghost love interest

  • to notice the cat who's really just trying to be even his friend,

  • and Sandstorm deserves better than that.

  • She stands up for him against other warriors who want to put him down for his talents as a deputy or mentor,

  • and even supports him in subtler ways like Whitestorm does when it comes to patrols.

  • Even when he directly blows up at her for something she never said, she forgives him almost immediately,

  • with only one sharp phrase to tell him what he did was wrong.

  • Even with every time she reaches out to him, and every time he uses her as an emotional crutch,

  • Fireheart doesn't recognize Sandstorm is trying to get close to him until Cinderpelt tells him directly,

  • where he suddenly is implied to start feeling love...

  • from which we would conclude that he didn't even think about loving her until he knew she loved him

  • Poor Sandstorm.

  • Our main character isn't exactly perfect.

  • Even putting aside his romantic issues, Fireheart...is not a good leader.

  • He needs to learn to be one by the end of the series, but

  • but he has a lot of areas to grow in, and he won't succeed in all of them.

  • To be a good leader, you need three things: skill with large-scale organizing,

  • the ability to manage personal relations, and a proper balance of firmness and compassion when dealing with those you lead.

  • He has none of these.

  • He shows continuously that he has great difficulty with large scale organizing and decision making

  • whenever he is asked to pick patrols or mentors for apprentices,

  • something Whitestorm and even Cinderpelt easily slip into.

  • In this particular matter, he gets better over time, even in this book. But that isn't enough.

  • He doesn't reach out to many of his clanmates, even Sandstorm,

  • who would like him unless he continuously screwed her over...which he does.

  • And with Cloudpaw, and moving backwards and forwards even Cinderpaw and Bramblepaw,

  • he shows that he is unable to teach cats to do anything they wouldn't do otherwise.

  • All three of his apprentices follow their own nature in the end, and lead to their own fates.

  • And here we see that when Cloudpaw is disobedient, Fireheart's only strategy is

  • yelling at and punishing him over and over, sometimes even ignoring him, in the hopes that he'll learn eventually.

  • Very few of the things I have talked about are necessarily flaws with the book,

  • but they do make maddening characters that are easy to condense into their simple

  • nice hero guy,” “angry girl,” “depressed leader,” etc. stereotypes

  • if it's been a while since you read the books.

  • There are a few parts, continuing over this whole arc,

  • that are major issues which I will likely cover in Sunny's Spiels another time,

  • but for the most part, this was a good character-study book with a big cast of reasonably flawed characters

  • and growth towards what I'm *sure* will be a great ending to the first full Warriors series.

  • But just how good the penultimate book turns out to be is something I'll have to cover next time...in our trip through time.

Rising Storm is a bit of a lull in the original arc, well, the closest thing to a lull this arc has.

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