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  • The seconds supporting paragraph has been finished.

  • We can move on to the concluding paragraph and the concluding paragraph has three sentences to it.

  • The first is a summary, and this is a summary of paragraph supporting paragraph one and supporting paragraph two.

  • So the two topics we talked about in there that comes into our summary the second is a restatement.

  • Restatements of pieces.

  • So we're going to say our thesis again in different words.

  • Finally, a prediction.

  • Yeah, a recommendation.

  • Basically what we believe will come true in the future.

  • Based on this s e or what?

  • We want to come true in the future based on this essay.

  • Okay, so now the first thing is to summarize in a sentence what we talked about in paragraph one and what we talked about in paragraph two.

  • So we probably want to see something like, in conclusion, restaurant food is both more convenient and taste your then my own cooking.

  • Okay, that's the summary.

  • So we talked about how it's more convenient.

  • And we talked about how its taste your paragraphs one and supporting parents one and two.

  • The second sentence is a restatement of her thesis So if we come up back to her introduction paragraph and take a look at our thesis, I prefer to go to food stands of restaurants as opposed to preparing food at home.

  • And we just want to state this again in difference words.

  • So perhaps we could say something like thus, I choose to eat majority of my meals outside my home and strongly prefer this to cooking for myself.

  • So that's the re Stephen of thesis.

  • We can choose between a prediction and a recommendation.

  • And I think based on this essay would probably choose prediction.

  • And that prediction would be that are this choice of lifestyle or this choice to eat outside is not going to change anytime soon.

  • So, um uh, so I believe I will continue, Um, this lifestyle as long as I am a working person, I believe I will continue this lifestyle as long as I'm a working person, not the greatest conclusion I've ever written.

  • But take it so that's the S a process from start to finish.

  • So, uh, of course, when you write your essay, you don't want to put titles and like I have I just did that because I wanted to keep it organized that we knew where we were at all times.

  • So let's take out these okay?

  • And if we read the entire essay from start to finish together, we can see how it all connects opinions on food very tremendously, as does an individual's culinary skill.

  • Thus, some people like to eat out, while others prefer to stay at home and cook for themselves.

  • For me, I prefer to go to food stands or restaurants as opposed to preparing food at home.

  • Eating in this manner is Botham or convenience.

  • It is both more convenient and taste year, and I will analyze these areas in my essay.

  • Firstly, eating in a restaurant is much more convenient than eating at home.

  • For example, when I finish a long day of work, I often do not have enough time to prepare a meal for myself at home.

  • Further, many international restaurants lined the street where I live.

  • That's going to a restaurant is a much more convenient option for me.

  • This is there for one of the main reasons I prefer restaurants to cooking at home.

  • A second reason is that restaurant food always tastes better than the food I cook.

  • I'm not a talented chef by any stretch, and the foods I cook never turn out the way I plan.

  • For example, I often over cooked foods to the points that they're unpalatable.

  • For this reason, restaurant food is consistently a taste your option.

  • And is there for another reason why I prefer buying my meals to preparing them at home.

  • In conclusion, restaurant food is both more convenient and tastier than my own cooking.

  • Thus, I choose to eat the majority of my meals outside my home cooking for myself.

  • I believe I will continue this lifestyle as long as I am a working person.

  • Okay, that's the essay from start to finish.

  • I hope this video was helpful to you.

  • And if you'd like to you, Seymour, I encourage you to visit my website www dot i'll stash isles dot com.

  • Thank you for listening.

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B1 paragraph essay convenient prefer restaurant home

IELTS Written essay from start to finish (part 4 of 4)

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