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“I am an invisible man.”
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“Mrs. Dalloway said she would buy the flowers herself.”
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“You are about to begin reading Italo Calvino's new novel.”
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These three opening lines, from Ralph Ellison's "Invisible Man,"
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Virginia Woolf's "Mrs. Dalloway,"
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and Italo Calvino's "If on a winter's night a traveler,"
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each establish a different point of view.
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Who is telling a story, and from what perspective,
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are some of the most important choices an author makes.
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Told from a different point of view, a story can transform completely.
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Take this fairytale:
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"Rapunzel, Rapunzel," the Prince called, "let down your hair."
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Rapunzel unbraided her hair and slung it out the window.
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The prince climbed her tresses into the tower.
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Rapunzel is typically told like this, with the narrator outside the story.
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This point of view is called third person.
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But Rapunzel can also be told by a character in the story—
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a first person narrator.
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The tail end of Rapunzel's locks plopped down at my feet.
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I grabbed on and began to climb… ugh!
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I couldn't untangle myself.
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Strands came off all over me, sticking to my sweat.
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In a first person narrative, the story can change dramatically
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depending on which character is the narrator.
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Say Rapunzel was narrating instead of the prince:
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I hope he appreciates how long it takes to unbraid 25 feet of hair, I thought.
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OUCH! I'll be honest; I thought my scalp would stretch off of my skull.
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"Can you climb any faster?" I yelled.
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In second person, the narrator addresses the story to the reader:
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He calls your name. He wants you to let your hair down.
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You just finished braiding it, but hey– you don't get a lot of visitors.
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Third person, first person, and second person perspectives
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each have unique possibilities and constraints.
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So how do you choose a point of view for your story?
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Constraints aren't necessarily a bad thing—
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they can help focus a story or highlight certain elements.
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For example,
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a third person narrator is necessarily a bit removed from the characters.
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But that can be good for stories where a feeling of distance is important.
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A third person narrator can be either limited,
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meaning they stick close to one character's thoughts and feelings,
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or they can be omniscient, able to flit between characters' minds
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and give the reader more information.
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A first person story creates closeness between the reader and the narrator.
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It's also restricted by the narrator's knowledge.
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This can create suspense
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as the reader finds out information along with the character.
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A first person narrator doesn't necessarily
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have to represent the character's experience faithfully—
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they can be delusional or dishonest.
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In Kazuo Ishiguro's novel "The Remains of the Day,"
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Stevens, an aging British butler in 1956, recounts his many years of service,
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but fails to acknowledge the flaws of the man he serves.
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The cracks in his narrative eventually draw the reader's attention
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to the under-acknowledged failings of the culture and class system
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he inhabits.
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Justin Torres's novel, "We the Animals,"
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begins with a plural first person narrator:
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“We were six snatching hands, six stomping feet;
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we were brothers, boys, three little kings locked in a feud for more.”
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Partway through the story, the point of view shifts
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to first person singular, from we to I, as the boys come of age
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and one brother feels alienated from the others.
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Second person is a less common choice.
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It requires the writer to make the reader suspend disbelief to become another “you.”
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Placing the reader in a character's perspective
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can build urgency and suspense.
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Sometimes, though,
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second person is intended to distance the narrator from their own story,
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rather than bring the reader closer to the story.
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In these cases,
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second person narrators refer to themselves as “you” rather than “I.”
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Writers are constantly experimenting with fresh variations on point of view.
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New virtual and augmented reality technologies
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may expand the possibilities for this experimentation.
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By placing people at a particular vantage point in virtual space,
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how might we change the way we tell and experience stories?